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JohnSheppard
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PostSubject: Update #1 - Darkness Rising Snippet!   Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:57 am

Here's just a taste of whats to come!

This is just plain text, it looks better in Word XD But you can get the jist of it Very Happy

[Cut to scene of inside helicopter, Hansford and Hillier both in SWAT uniformís minus the helmet, Hansford with ballistic glasses on, and Hillier with normal sunglasses]
Hansford: You really think this is going to work at all?
Hillier: At best itíll get us closer to the White House
Hansford: Valid point, letís get this party started!
[Hansford drops a flashbang off the side, before scaling down the rope and landing, swinging his M4 Carbine from his back and forward, Hillier behind him, as SWAT crewís rappel down from their helicopters]
Hansford: Letís move up people!
[Cut to overhead shot, SWAT and Stalkerís colliding at a crossroad, piled up cars providing protection for either side]
Hansford: I want a sniper up on that rooftop! Think you can manage that?
[SWAT Sniper and another officer smile and then nod]
Hillier: Iíll take a couple around and flankíem
Hansford: Do your worst!
[An officer is shot as Hansford pulls himself and his M4 from behind a car, shooting towards the other side of the crossroad, him leading on the others in a charge as he jumps the car and begins running towards them, a shot from the sniper is heard behind them, the shot getting a Stalker clean in the head]
Stalker: We surrender!
Hansford: We honestly donít care!
[Hansford pulls out his sidearm and shoots the Stalker in the chest]
Hillier: Why in godís name did you do that?
Hansford: Because the less of them we need to worry about, the better!

Once it's done it'll look cooler than this.. even has a title picture XD Dunno why I did it, anyway, heres what else I've included for Update #1!



  • Due to be released sometime in the middle of 2009, with some luck!
  • May end up as a Series If I get time!
  • Never again will I write a screenplay of this size!
  • Some graphic's to give you an idea of where the movie is set are coming soon!


Until next update, I'll catcha later!
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PostSubject: Re: Update #1 - Darkness Rising Snippet!   Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:15 pm

SHEPPARD!!! Don't WASTE your time with having to format the words to the correct stuff in word!!! Use this screenwriting software I use, it's free and incredibly easy Wink
Celtx Screenwriting Software
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PostSubject: Re: Update #1 - Darkness Rising Snippet!   Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:59 am

Lol, thanks.. I'll give it a shot XD

Can I import my already done stuff in? Lol?
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PostSubject: Re: Update #1 - Darkness Rising Snippet!   Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:24 pm

You should be able to, but it may take a bit of reediting for it, cuz celtx isn't exactly intelligent with IMPORTING scripts.
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