OK, so I looked through the first episode of Warp Gate and thought to myself.
Holy crap, this is awful.
So, what I did, was I opened up my Celtx program, a screenwriting software, and redid the episode. I went through all the scenes, corrected words, such as cereal to serial. I must've been hungry when I was writing...
So, I fixed it up, and now I replaced the original version (which is still available for download on my filefront page) with the re-imagined one. It's in the same thread as the first episode was. So, go read it, and enjoy!
